First of all, I would like to apologise for the lack of posts over the past few weeks. Without further ado, let’s get started.
Strengths: Good introduction, great comparisons.
Weaknesses: Lack of elaboration on one of the contents, reference list was centered.
Told you about the reference list, didn’t I? I knew that something would eventually go wrong.
Anyway, I’m genuinely satisfied with my grade because I hadn’t worked on essays for a long time. Goodness.