First of all, I would like to apologise for the lack of posts over the past few weeks. Without further ado, let’s get started.



Strengths: Good introduction, great comparisons.

Weaknesses: Lack of elaboration on one of the contents, reference list was centered.

Told you about the reference list, didn’t I? I knew that something would eventually go wrong.


Anyway, I’m genuinely satisfied with my grade because I hadn’t worked on essays for a long time. Goodness.



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